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2016年山西中考英语作文题目及范文

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2016年山西中考英语作文题目及范文:When I show kindness and help others

Ⅸ.书面表达(共15分)
81.(15分).向他人表达善意并帮助他人体现了一个人良好的品格.当你向被人表达善意并给他人提供帮助时,你希望得到回报(repay)吗?针对这一话题,九年级六班的同学们展开了辩论.
假设你是正方或反方的一员,请围绕你的观点,结合自己的亲身经历,说出2至3条理由来说服同学们(只需选择一方观点表达即可).
要求:1.词数不少于80词;
2.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名.
When I show kindness and help others,I ________________________________________________________



When I show kindness and help others,I never expect them to repay me.(选择一方观点) In my view,helping others gives me a strong feeling of being needed and brings me happyness.On the other hand,everyone may get into trouble and need help,too.(说明理由)
Several days ago,while I was having a walk in the park,I found a little boy crying.(高分句型)Then I asked him what was the matter,and he told me he couldn't find his mom.Luckily,he remembered his mother's phone number.So I called her immediately.Ten minutes later,the boy saw his mom and became excited.His mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift,but I refused.(高分句型)At that time,I felt quite happy because I did something really good.(举例)
All in all,the world needs love and we should be ready to help others without expecting any repay.If you wanted repay,a"Thanks"would be enough.(高分句型)(总结)
【点评】写图画作文时,首先要看懂图画所表达的内容,最好列一下提纲,然后根据提纲进行写作就不会造成离题或偏题,但要注意,文章必须要覆盖整个要点,行文要注意简化,不要拖沓冗长,要使用正确的句子,同时注意,要使用一定的连接词,比如:first,second,what's more,finally等.再者,在作文完成时要注意检查、修改,如果有时间可以先写到草稿纸上,再抄到答题纸上,这样更容易得高分.最后,注意使用一些句型和短语,使整篇文章意思连贯、流畅,方能成就一篇好的作文.

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